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  • Writer's pictureRyan Lawrence

Peer feed back

when it came to feedback, one thing that people picked up on was audio quality. This is something i will have to go back and work on, change and mess around with to get both the final cut of the film and the sizzle reel sounding great.


another criticism was the music. Some felt it did not fit or add any pacing to the show reel. I will have to search for alternatives that may help solve this issue


when it came to the film, Jack pointed out the interview segments in A Bad Time were slightly off putting or out of place, this is something that may also be cut out of the film due to time constraints however i would much prefer to keep them there as they i feel they help with the overall structure of the film .


People liked the over all look for my website but sound that some times blended int with the background too well and also didn't portray well enough. I will have to keep updating the website with any relevant work, work experience or projects to further showcase what i am able to do.


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